Sunday, June 14, 2015


Reflecting on my second paper actually pulls me in two separate directions. J

First, I looked into the varying styles of parenting. Although I have seen these examples throughout my life, I liked how they were defined and separated.  I learned a great deal on why some children behave as they do. Their parental guidance is a great influence, and in many instances, their siblings behave in the same manner.  Of course, there is always one!  The individual who stands out.  This can be in either a positive or negative manner.  When the individual child has a strong will, all the guidance (or neglect) cannot keep the child’s true spirit in.

As for my second direction, we were asked to dive in and deeply evaluate a peer’s work.  I found this very difficult.  I am striving to develop my writing skill; learning the ins and outs, what is and is not acceptable.  My strife lays here- what if I give incorrect information, what if I am completely off base?  I am guessing this task was assigned to do exactly this.  Get me out of my comfort zone, to learn skills by helping others hone theirs.  I just hope I did not give anyone terrible guidance.  If I did- I’M SORRY!

I find the papers quite difficult to start, but once I do get started I will not stop.  I need to finish; I cannot walk away.  I will lose my entire train of thought!  Although this is my rough draft, I am then able to go back and revise.  My main ideas are there, as disheveled as they may be!  I go back many times, often reading aloud to myself.    I am hoping, with practice, my writing skills will increase and the writing process will not take quite so long.


5 comments:

  1. Hey, Jenn!

    I struggled with the idea of giving classmates horrible advice, as well. Going into that confidently and saying "You should do this..." can be hard when you aren't even sure you've got it figured out yourself. Hopefully, though, we all know what we are trying to say enough that we can choose what advice to take and what advice to leave.

    I'm sure you did great!
    Alyssa

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  2. Hi Jenn,

    I can relate to being out of the comfort zone. The assignments in the class have been out of my comfort zone, but surely a life lesson in all. The skill of providing feedback can't be taught, it's something you just have to do. I think we are all afraid of this, but I think we are doing a great job at it. We are all like our writing skills. a work in progress.

    Katie

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  3. Hi Jenn,

    I can relate to being out of the comfort zone. The assignments in the class have been out of my comfort zone, but surely a life lesson in all. The skill of providing feedback can't be taught, it's something you just have to do. I think we are all afraid of this, but I think we are doing a great job at it. We are all like our writing skills. a work in progress.

    Katie

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  4. Hi Jenn!

    I also agree about evaluating other peer's assignment's, I did not like this! However, we did our best and will learn from this class. I feel I am not qualified to give feedback on other student's papers ,because I am still learning myself.

    Kaf

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  5. Hi Jenn!

    I also agree about evaluating other peer's assignment's, I did not like this! However, we did our best and will learn from this class. I feel I am not qualified to give feedback on other student's papers ,because I am still learning myself.

    Kaf

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